tagNon-Erotic PoetryDandelion's Dance

Dandelion's Dance

byNeonurotic©

They're all arms and legs across
the stage. I'm amazed with the beauty
of something I've never watched
or ever cared for, but now I see them.
They're on pointe, white skirts whirling,
graceful as dandelion seeds
dancing on a breeze. As my flower floats
by, I make a wish she is this happy
always then root it all in memories.

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by KatieJones07/27/13

Loved this. Emotion came through very well. As a rule if I say something good I will offer a suggestion just so you don't think I am patting you on the back mindlessly. If I could change anything itmore...

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by kitten196407/26/13

WOW

Just...wow.
So beautiful.

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