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Click hereEndless need dark and deep
In still of night our secret keep
Eye to eye and skin to skin
When shall our next dance begin
Fragrant air and candled light
I will come again in dark of night
I think I AM in love, at least a little bit, with this poem.
Especially inspiring was the dance stanza: “Eye to eye and skin to skin / When shall our next dance begin”. Although rhythmically not perfect, it still worked for me in setting the tone to the whole poem. I could actually imagine a sensual close dance to the rhythm of the poem. Yea, dance is a great metaphor (and reality) for erotic tension and sensuality
I am not in love with this (it is too brief and I'm not that easy) I am in like with it. It's heady and makes me think of potions! yummy. Mentioned in New Poems Reviews.