Dark Need Reply

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/09/2021
Created 09/08/2006
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Endless need dark and deep
In still of night our secret keep

Eye to eye and skin to skin
When shall our next dance begin

Fragrant air and candled light
I will come again in dark of night

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Man!

I think I AM in love, at least a little bit, with this poem.

Especially inspiring was the dance stanza: “Eye to eye and skin to skin / When shall our next dance begin”. Although rhythmically not perfect, it still worked for me in setting the tone to the whole poem. I could actually imagine a sensual close dance to the rhythm of the poem. Yea, dance is a great metaphor (and reality) for erotic tension and sensuality

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowover 17 years ago
Although

I am not in love with this (it is too brief and I'm not that easy) I am in like with it. It's heady and makes me think of potions! yummy. Mentioned in New Poems Reviews.

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