Dawn of Night

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sassynyc
sassynyc
6 Followers

The midnight sky is strewn with pixie dust
Magically suspended in infinity
Slung low and close enough to taste as our tongues play
Connect the dots across time and space
Though they are always too far away
To reach out and touch, and tie up in ribbon
If I could believe the night was velvet
And the stars were precious jewels
I could finally give you half of what you’ve given me
But I stand empty handed and full hearted
All I can give you is me
As Dawn slices through Midnight’s throat
Bleeding sunshine onto the horizon
We are what happens to this brand new day

sassynyc
sassynyc
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4 Comments
unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijoualmost 16 years ago
that last line

is fucking perfect. The rest is damn fine too.

JaneAustenJaneAustenalmost 16 years ago
Enjoyable read!

"As dawn slices through midnight's throat" ... that line alone is worth the price of admission.

AnschulAnschulalmost 16 years ago
But it is enough...

Girl, you are really finding your voice. I like this a lot.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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