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twelveoone
twelveoone
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that light that falls on rock
rose alone on the mountain
in air that would shrink the words
of who is without you

what of the peace of heaven
is longing enough to sustain
these eyes that see through tears
behold a wavering sun

that which glints on steel
of another dawning
beheld by failing hands
of who is without you

twelveoone
twelveoone
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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years agoAuthor
anon

do better,

can you?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This is why people don't read poetry

Boring, boring, boring...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
dawn diddy

dawnd on me that ur a pawmpuss arse

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
oh

those last two lines, heartbreaker...

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years agoAuthor
WSO

WOW, how nice to see it dawned on someone. And, yeh Bog, you can't get it, even the rose has a tendency to disappear.

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