Day After

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Overloaded
Overfilled
Excitement high
Can’t sit still

Pick up the phone
Call a friend
Talk so fast
Thought it was the end

You talk at me
I understand
Your commanding word
Your stinging hand

The collar chokes
The restraints they hold
My bodies ready
To be Your mould

Pull and twist
Squeeze and tug
Turn and push
Knees hit the rug

Looking up
Without sight
Hands in hair
Just don’t fight

Open mouth
On my knees
Your thrusting rod
Sharing seed

Bend and shape
Take my will
Oh please oh Sir
Drink Your fill

Bodies Yours
Mind is there
Push my legs
Up in the air

Sting me
Hurt me
Make me feel
Slap my ass
With Your rod of steel

Higher higher
Don’t let me fall
Blinding light
Floating space
Catch me now
Your arms so tight

Overloaded
Overfilled
Excitement high
Can’t sit still

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very effective...

I liked the pace of it.. as you were driven to higher highs by your master.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Heart racing

Where do you find someone who can make your heart race like that?

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
really good

loved the energy

and flow of this,

really worked for me.

enjoyed the read, thanks.

~ J

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
!

This has nice energy throughout.

trendyredheadtrendyredheadalmost 19 years ago
The pacing was nice

Would be even better if you changed "bodies" to "body's" throughout (a minor correction but an important one). Overall, I liked the short phrases, and your meter was good.