- Erotic Poetry
- Daydreaming
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Click hereThe softness of the curve
In the small of your back
The smallness of your back
That curves into
The softness of your cheeks
And the top of the valley
Where they begin
To curve
- COMMENTS
todski28over 9 years agooldbear, but wonder if the final line
"to curve"
would be better breaking the pattern you set up and writing instead
"to bend"
so you have a totally different word with different sonics but a duality in meaning, bends can mean a similar thing in to curves but also has a secondary meaning to ":bending over"
Ashesh9over 9 years agoThat curves into
The smallness of your cheeks
........that get cupped inside
palm of my hands ..........
....an inveterate , unashamed Bottom lover like me can go places'n do things with this Poem of yours , Oldbear !! thank you for sharin' : 5-ed ....
HoneyAdoredover 9 years ago...the poem and the image
Small and perfectly formed, each stroke of your pen delicately defines the shape
