Dear Marcelle, Love, Simone

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susansnow
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Shame looks like furs on her. Elegant and cruel. Poured love like porridge from the finally tapped vessel; it spills to this moment. Before the accident she described herself as one-dimensional and vapid. After the crime, the violation, she became like artificial light: inescapable but replaced often. She admires what is between your legs.

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susansnowsusansnowover 10 years agoAuthor
Hi Harry!

Thanks for your feedback. Just message me if you ever want to know the "truth" behind the piece. Or if it something I've dreamed up in a haze...

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
your works confuse the hell out of me most of the time

but when I see 'em I always read. good to see you.

susansnowsusansnowover 10 years agoAuthor
Allusions

There's an allusion more to "Story of the Eye." Perhaps there's a taste of Severin but mostly Simone and Marcelle from Bataille's work.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Furs on her. Elegant & cruel : is there an allusion to

Venus in Furs ?!

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Nice

"Shame looks like furs on her. Elegant and cruel."

"became like artificial light: inescapable but replaced often"

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