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that same cool
dank space
scent of cigarettes
and primer
and year old fuck
i retreat again
this time alone
and find my fist
wound round a wooden piece
18 ounces of hate
i swing in darkness
effecting a contact
a resounding crack
liberate myself completely
from your lethal sickened state
again
that same cool
dank space
that place we fucked
when we didn't loathe
so much,
is where i'll leave
you laying.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Swing that stick around

Anger expressed in this is easily felt by the reader. Very vivid. Great work.

<3

sacksackover 18 years ago
powerful....

images were not always necessarily pleasant, but tellingly described.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your poem

...is mentioned in the new poems thread.