- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Deep Seeded Emotions....
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As I went outside
to let the dogs "go"
I smiled inside as I heard
the nature that I love and know
Removing the chains
of time and space
while letting my mortal
soul embrace
The crickets chirping
chirping away
While the birds sang
to my soul today
The wood pecker was
pecking
and the dogs
all were necking
Life is like a river
you go where it takes you
life is where things
flourish and grow too
It is a precious right
just to be alive
while I watch winter
taking it's dive
Life is coming back
I see it in the bees
as they are swarming
around in the trees
Winter is behind us
and spring is now here
and the summer
is very near
All of the brown
now disappearing
as the beautiful green
is.....reappearing
With "deep seeded emotions"
I enjoy the nature that I know
my body just relaxing
while letting my soul go
It's all about.......
the inner peace I feel
rather than the outer
that isn't really real
Then like the winter that
haunts before
summer is now here
letting my spirit soar
With a smile so bright
a candle I could burn
WHAT I AM never changing
while WHO I AM...
is always changing.......
as I learn
With DEEP SEEDED EMOTIONS
that are warm and tender
blowing all thru me
as my soul I surrender
I crumble and fall
relaxing as the winds blow
while the dogs are just running
all around below
- COMMENTS
BluePoetabout 17 years agoMany people believe that deep seeded is the correct phrase, which is a common mistake. The phrase you want to use is deep-seated.
"The expression has nothing to do with a feeling being planted deep within one, but instead refers to its being seated firmly within one’s breast."
I'm pointing this out because you use deep seeded as your title, and even in your poem in all CAPs.
You write: "takeing it's dive." You may want to try this: taking its dive.
Even though this line is nonsensical "and the dogs
all were necking" it might actually sound better if you wrote: and the dogs were all necking.
"re-appearing" is just reappearing. It's not a hyphenated word.
correct ellipses ...
My Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago....such as moving from winter to spring (grin) nice write, I like nature poems (~_~)
