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Click hereCharacter distilled,
scorched clean, compressed
to crystal pure impeccable.
Even back then
when she wouldn't dare
drawling...
I'm just a homely
country girl ya know.
Don't bother me
with Metro Blues,
take off your fancy shoes
and feel the sea
with me.
Lin Li-li Lovebug Lifeline
would no longer crack
and fall under any mountain,
and carried my all,
my world, my word,
mine, me,
upon slender shoulders
and silly laughter,
juggling boulders,
bending steel
and spoons
and souls...
Hay loco, why the gloom?
Let's shock the world,
right here, right now...
...or get us a room.
Banter like band-aid,
straight shooting
simplicity squared,
spun around silken
smooth song.
And not before long
eternity impaired
came together.
For Lin Linalora
Lovecat Libido knows...
Heaven dwells
in a body warm kiss
and a hot cuppa joe
unsweeten'.
Y'all knows this
but any good thang
bears repeatin'
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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"character distilled" is what this poem is all about. Well done.
is mentioned on the new poems review thread :)
* I will also no longer use the thermometer as a rating tool, thanks