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Click hereStreamers of spent energy
permeate her nipples
and vaporize in the air.
Wispy, smoky emotions
curling lazily away, a
milky, melting mosaic.
Confluence of contrails,
the exhaustion of fumes,
white roses dissipating
before her satisfied eyes,
creamysoft emission of
delicate configurations.
I have a new poem called Delicate Observations which will be posted today, but obviously I never read this one!! Very effective as always, good example of less is more!
mentioned in today's reviews http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=10737310#post10737310
no thermometer reading
What else is there to say? You write good poetry. You wrote another good poem. Frankly, I wish it sucked a little so I could offer some suggestions, but noooo... it's too good for that. Thanks a lot, steve!