Delicate configurations

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Streamers of spent energy
permeate her nipples
and vaporize in the air.

Wispy, smoky emotions
curling lazily away, a
milky, melting mosaic.

Confluence of contrails,
the exhaustion of fumes,
white roses dissipating

before her satisfied eyes,
creamysoft emission of
delicate configurations.

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sacksackover 19 years ago
very interesting.....

I have a new poem called Delicate Observations which will be posted today, but obviously I never read this one!! Very effective as always, good example of less is more!

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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mentioned in today's reviews http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=10737310#post10737310

no thermometer reading

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
I see this poem

...out my window right now! Very nice, Steve.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
well, it's good

What else is there to say? You write good poetry. You wrote another good poem. Frankly, I wish it sucked a little so I could offer some suggestions, but noooo... it's too good for that. Thanks a lot, steve!

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