Dew

bySpringBreezes©

dewy lawn
fresh
each blade of grass glistening
each nerve along your legs
under my kisses
sparkling

breeze
warm and rich
my breath
grazing
inner thighs

swell of clouds
heavenly rumble
music of moans
scent of creation

heaving hips
rolling so close
tasting the chase
of impending thunder,
your downpour
lightning clasp
illuminating us both

softly
together
forever bound
we glow.

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by todski2805/10/14

sensual

Well thought out conceptually, great use of metaphor, sensuality, could probably find a different word to glistening to freshen it up a little, you interlinked the theme very well, smooth read. Your usemore...

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