Do You

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Do You?

Do you feel me in the wind
blowing softly through your hair?
Does the violet-blue dawn
bring hope to your lonely soul?

I walk the invisible breeze with you,
a trapeze upon the wings of God,
luminescent glory of the rising sun
a beacon to the world of steady love.

When the radio plays your favorite,
does our forever filter through?
Witnessing entwined hands of lovers,
do you see this tomorrow as ours?

Our bliss transcends dimensions,
showing itself in myriad forms,
from the gentle clasping of hands
to music seemingly birthed in heaven.

Do you see my perfect love
within the blossom of the hybiscus?
Does the blooming Gardenia
recall quiet peace in my embrace?

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Lovely

Sappy, no. Touching. We need more honest moments that feel like this. Thank you.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Ok it's

sappy but I love this:

~When the radio plays your favorite,

does our forever filter through?

Witnessing entwined hands of lovers,

do you see this tomorrow as ours? ~

that's nice

Thank you

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