- Non-Erotic Poetry
- doing time
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Click herethere’s a dark side
he’d been to prison
the wasted 80’s
she pondered all
implications
but is unconcerned
having been locked
in the dark too
she understands
a hard hungry man
going down easy
with a soft woman
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoI was taken very easy by this poem which sounds so much like a ballad which should be fitted with the right melody and sung to all whose lives are hanging there and then one day there might be something else for them too...
And thanks again LeBroz for directing me to this poet throuuh your selections!
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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sandspikeabout 20 years agoUp front and to the point. Well written, love the last 3
lines. They would of been lost in a longer wordy poem.
jthserraabout 20 years agoan interesting flow with this one, an intriguing poem. I am left to wonder if both are falling downward or if it's a clever hint of sexuality at the end. I like that...
jim : )
Tathagataabout 20 years agoun a few words.
You get a sense of both people...and she's the stronger one.
great work
thank you
