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Domestic Bliss

byTristesse2©

By day she cooked and cleaned,
made a home, he toiled
in the halls of high finance,
pin-striped position of power
and responsibility. An immaculate,
modern couple.

But

at night the front door key
triggered his erection,
she would greet him all in leather,
or naked but for thigh-high boots,
once bespectacled with a metal rule
that stung his balls for weeks.
Always he'd rise to
her domination.

His dinner waiting
in a dog's bowl under the table,
she'd kick him if he used his hands.

Bad dog!

On good nights she'd find
a reason to flog him and
he would come to their bed
a burning, pulsing nerve where
she'd tease and deny until he
ached for release but she never
let him sleep before
mutual satisfaction.

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by todski2808/16/13

an afterthought

but she never
let him sleep before
mutual satisfaction.

this closing is good for me the reader in that it shows there is mutual appreciation for their own "kink"

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by todski2808/16/13

I thought I'd read this before

thanks Harry

I will never look at a banker the same ever again :)
The perspective from their two realities when jumping from stanza 1-2 such a contrast that it is a virtual slap in the face.

I'm notmore...

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by Angeline08/14/13

Wow!

That's one hot dommy poem. :D

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by erectus12308/14/13

Ashesh is off in the corner, god knows what he' doing

but this is well done and right up his A-lley

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