Domination

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Domination

I am searching for a Master to.....

guide me,
show me how to please you.

tease me,
take me to the brink and not let me peak till you say NOW!

discipline me,
teach me right from wrong.

care for me,
gentle touches when discipline is done.

bind me,
take what you need from me.

love me,
needing me to be near you to make you complete.

I am searching for you, Sir.

signed: your loving sub

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
I thought it was

simple, to the point, and poignant

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely done

we are all waiting for a sub like you!

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
This seems more of a personal than a poem - but it does scan at least

Try some more varied imagery - what is unique about what you want perhaps - the phrases you've used could me much more interestingly developed were you to do so. Keep on writing. Sweet O.