- Erotic Poetry
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strawberries and cream combined
with witty words as I go down
down
down for the last lick.
a day I shall never forget.
rain poured, your shirt drenched
a glove fit, outlining your smile
penciled in from a moist mouth
going down
down
down with those tight fitting levis
as twin seats dimpled from overexposure
and whirlpool visions swirl
taking me down
down
down
to cotton fields spread wide
before the eyes
awaiting the masters hand
mouth and tongue to partake
forsake, give it all
to go down
down
down
- COMMENTS
TeeTeeover 17 years agoto the last drop, girly this was delish!!!
Enjoyed the read thanks for sharing
TT
My Erotic Trailover 17 years agodown
...down
.......down
"Got 'DOWN' with it... did ya <grinin!
Loved the poem (~_*) but you knew that <chuckleboned
LeBrozover 17 years agoDelicious
The image I took away
Was of the time she gave me a
Brandy drink;
Refused to stop pouring
Got me thoroughly splattered;
Even now, years later
Leaves me needing a napkin...
WickedEveover 17 years agoI like over half of your poem. The strawberries and cream make me want to barf.
The middle is very good. I'd keep this and toss the strawberries:
a day I shall never forget.
rain poured, your shirt drenched
a glove fit, outlining your smile
penciled in from a moist mouth
going down
down
down with those tight fitting levis
as twin seats dimpled from overexposure
and whirlpool visions swirl
taking me down
down
down
to cotton fields spread wide
echoes_sover 17 years agoof going to raising attributes. wonderful flow...perhaps too many downs?
