Dressed to Kill

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The_Fool
The_Fool
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Carnival mask in scarlet
To match her lips
Colors her decadent mood
Makes each step a strut

As silk thighs whisper in the night
Her coat slips from her shoulder
For the doorman
Offering alabaster tipped with pink

He slips on his composure
Too late to even speak
As she saunters into the halo
Offered by muted streetlights

Patent heels that click the rhythm
Of her desire
Her ankles wrapped in straps with shiny buckles
Requiring almost obscene contortion from her to fasten

Fingertips tipped in ruby
Glide down her throat
Tracing complex curves
In her bemusement

As the taxi driver struggles to watch
Her memory a lingering scent
That leaves him wondering whether he collected
His fare and not caring

An overcoat puddles by the door
Sensuous curves on display
As she offers him her desire
Dying to celebrate their passion

The_Fool
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sassynycsassynycalmost 16 years ago
rather hot and bothered

very sexy and sensual poem. the ability to seduce with words is a gift. and nary a blue word did you utter.

i'd love to quote a favorite line, but there are far too many. suffice it to say, you had me swooning over the description of a strappy shoe. sent shivers right through me. has great appeal to the sensibilites of a clothes horse.

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Yum!

I'm not sure why, but this poem makes me think of the lyrical synopsis of a scene out of a Neil Gaiman story. Take that as you will, but it's intended as a high compliment.

impressiveimpressivealmost 18 years ago
So glad you're back!

All is now right with the (uni)verse. *kisses*

~Imp

ghost_girlghost_girlalmost 18 years ago
purrrrrrrrrrr

"slips on composure" excellent line

loved the whole poem

g_g

TeeTeeTeeTeealmost 18 years ago
Sensually

erotic, loved the picture you painted here

thanks for the read

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