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Dropped ball

byLesseloovesPeter©

"I dropped the ball," said she
"No, I'm the one," said he
but neither knew
which one spoke true
so still it lays between

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by Queenelizabeth10/23/13

I agree

Echoing what Maria said, well done in so few lines. Very profound and strong

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by Ashesh910/22/13

This reminds me of the fabled Nawabs of Allahabad who would bow to one another

On the highway " after you , Jenaab !" & stand for hours insistin' the other Noble should precede him in a show of futile ( IMHO) courtesy !?!

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by Oldbear6310/22/13

Lesse -

And when it is caught - Yep, I've been writing too much about that!

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by Maria239410/22/13

what a surprise!

It is short, well-written and rather profound. I truly enjoyed your poem and I have to say, thanks for making me smile. The ending was great :)

~ maria

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by LesseloovesPeter10/22/13

Sooner or later there's got to be a catch.

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