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Click hereyou just throw up in the sink,
chew a couple breath mints
and go back online, like
it’s routine maintenance.
Your hands get really steady
when you’re loaded, like
the alcohol slows your nerves
to the point you’re polite
to elders, cops, and dogs
because any of them could bite
you and enjoy it. But you want
to only care about that hour,
whatever it is, where you crack
whatever it is you’re doing,
incessantly, and relax into buzz.
It could be heroin, but that kills
you more quickly than anything
other than meth, and you’d rather
drag along like you have a life,
talking howit frees my artistry
like Bukowski’s Sterno art
and seventy-five books, like
addiction was a fucking muse
and not a closet you can’t get out of,
wrapped in those old coats,
frayed mittens in your mouth,
in the dark, tasting cheap yarn.
I like the way you portray the justification in quick, flowing lines that race right into the repudiation of all that has gone before and leaving me pleasantly aware that there is no bullshit clouding the writer's reality
to comment on this, except to say Buk could be funny as hell, so I'll just say I left a 5.
the false aphrodisiac
you wake up the next day, look at puffy eyes in the mirror
and the shit storm called life is still there
since I can relate, it struck a chord
imho, you might smooth it out some
didn't care for the word 'really', nor the effect you tried with ',like'
but again, just my opinion
you have good content and the reference is perfect (seventy-five books)