- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Drunks
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the drunks on Klausenerplatz
slump rag doll across a bench
a bottleneck down each other’s throat
the quickest way to escape this life
but a flame can’t escape the candle
destined to exist in its own light
they’ll sober up when the beer runs out
the candle still not dowsed
will burn until it ceases
- COMMENTS
vrosej10over 13 years agoYou're getting a recommend. Good stuff. Nice and concrete and a really good choice exactly naming the place.
Angelineover 13 years agoNo wasted words and it says more than the relatively few words you've chosen, which to me is the sign of a really good poem.
