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- Dying Game
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Soul screaming in pain
Fear clouding my eyes
I refuse to complain
Mind silently going insane
Please release my ties
Help me with my game
Quickly bleed me dry
No don't say your name
Take my hand when I cry
Stand by me while I die
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FifthFlowerover 17 years agoMeter off, theme good
The meter was off in some of the lines. Just count the syllables and accents. They must match between the two stanzas.
duddle146over 17 years agosecure.
How comforting to have someone accompany you to the Gate ~ just before you cross over ~ hold your hand
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