- Erotic Poetry
- E.S. Stanza #2
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Click hereTake joy found in the form of a woman
What pleasure awaits her yielding to you
How pleasing the rounds of flesh under hand
Sensations known well but found ever new
Invites repeated ballet pas de deux
Dance with her sinuous steps close embrace
Taste lips wet waiting and covered like dew
Love her quite well friend but make no mistake
Constant use is a drug, over use brings heartache
- COMMENTS
Quivering_Quillabout 11 years agoHarry, another poignant poem that I enjoyed.... My favorite line was the last.... So very observant and ringing with poetic justice..... Thanks for sharing...
HarryHillabout 11 years agoAuthorlike dew is a simile and a constraint of the ABABBCBCC form of the Spenserian stanza. Perhaps I blocked myself in by the use of simple rhymes in the construction of my first two stanza. If you want to see how the master did it try 'The Faerie Queen' by Edmund Spencer.
erectus123about 11 years agonice lines
"Sensations known well but found ever new
Invites repeated ballet pas de deux"
would you substitute your "rounds" for "mounds"? Not the candy bars but the fleshy ones? or are you referring to dance here?
The "dew" strikes me as not the best word as dew falls on still objects when the humidity is high and there is a diverse temperature gradient, I gather you mean wet or slick but for me, and perhaps I am wrong, it does not fit. Forgive me but it makes me think of a corpse at an early morning open casket burial where dew has fallen on the lips, but perhaps I am gravely in error there, sorry Henry, but I do like the poem , no puns intended (though accidentally included)....
