Early Grave

bytheoncomingstorm©

It started out with a vision
What we saw made us so cynical
We aborted the mission
We spent our golden years getting old
We grew up
We got bigger
We got jobs and
We sold our souls
Now we are stranded somewhere between rebellion and the real world

I was counting on an early grave
Now I don't know what to do with myself
Some people just can't be saved
And I'm one of them, I'm one of them
But I could use a little help

We came to on the carpet
Clutching our chest
Crying out to a God that didn't exist
In our heads or in our hearts
We started asking questions
The meaning of life
The meaning of death
Came up empty handed
How we bawled all night
We balled our fists up, our fists up

I was counting on an early grave
Now I don't know what to do with myself
Some people just can't be saved
And I'm one of them, I'm one of them
But I could use a little help
LET IT GO

We started out with a vision
Going out with a vengeance
We started out with a vision
Going out with a vengeance

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by kemander12/28/13

How Can You?

So succinctly express my life when you don't even know me?

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by theoncomingstorm11/10/13

I feel old beyond my years... I've seen too much, been through things no one should ever have to go through, and I'm pretty sure it has aged my soul

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by Oldbear6310/24/13

Wow, Storm

You are too young to know how it feels to grow older, but you caught a good deal of it.

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