Earthquakes and Oceans

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HeartnSole
HeartnSole
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The moment where my hands,
Almost touched your body,
I quivered.

And when my hands touched your body,
I shook.

I could feel you around me,
Pushing and pulling me.

Sometimes I think you're the ocean surrounding me,
And I'm ruled by you.

But sometimes,
I feel like an earthquake,
Reverberating throughout you.

And I can feel myself shaking and quaking,
And suddenly,
I'm moving you.

HeartnSole
HeartnSole
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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
NATURE AT ITS BEST WORST

what bounds will it hold and surpass. TK U MLJ LV NV

oneiriaoneiriaover 11 years ago
Very well done

I loved the use of language and imagery in this poem.

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
liking this

wonder if the reduction of pronouns would enhance?? Not qualified but engaged