- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Eating Out
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beautiful shape
a lucious treat
breathing it in
such a wonderful musk
memories drawing me deeper
dreaming of what's to come
i can almost taste it
even before i start
soft fuzz brushing against my lips
it's time for a taste
my tongue touches the velvety skin
opening it up
I lap at the sweet juice
dripping down my chin
a soft moan escapes my lips
i've never had one this good before
but then....
i could eat a peach for hours
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years ago..when I was a little girl I loved eating Georgia peaches. The juice dripped off my chin and fell to the floor.. but now it doesn't...fall to the floor. So now I finish up with the most juiciest nipples that you've ever tasted.
duddle146about 17 years agoThis rendering on the subject of eating a peach ~ makes you want to recall the joy of every peach you have ever eaten.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoWelcome to Lit with this piece that while nicely suggestive, falls into that dangerous trap of sounding rather trite by slipping into cliché {the peach}. Don't be discouraged; it's a common trap writers fall into, hoping all the while to sound original.
