Echoes

byjthserra©

Echo my cries,
song to your ears
as each stroke
pushes me
closer to the line --
I tremble.

Echo your name
as I plead
for your touch,
your softness
soothing
the burning.

Echo your sighs
as you sate
your need
on me.
My strength
feeding you.

Echo my word
as I collapse,
spent, sobbing,
as you hold me
taste my tears
as I whisper “… rose.”

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