- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Click hereAllow my love,
warm as the fallen rain
Seep into your thirsty Earth
Hear the sigh of my contentment
soft as the whisper of wings
Let me speak to your deep, watery soul
Of all the dews
Of all the mornings
Past and yet to come
The fire of our spirit
United in creative force
From the fire, we are passionately, fiercly reborn...
And yet again
You are as tender as a new flush of moss
- COMMENTS
flyguy69about 19 years agoI liked this very much, Image. It is reverential without being silly, and that last line is a gem!
dcpoet44about 19 years agoit reminds me of foundation. it is the best way i can say that it comes to me. nicely written though. this stanza i really like:
Let me speak to your deep, watery soul
Of all the dews
Of all the mornings
Past and yet to come
Jennifer Cabout 19 years agoLiked this alot, especially
Hear the sigh of my contentment
soft as the whisper of wings.
What a beautiful image this brings to me. ~ J
Wanton Vixxxenabout 19 years agoin the feel of this romantic piece. I can't select a phrase or verse I like most, as I flowed with the entire poem's current mesmerized. You do indeed befit your pen name <smile> as this work shows beautifully. Well done!
Vixxx
