- Non-Erotic Poetry
- elusive
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ellipse or ellipsis
incomplete sentances
dance with incomplete circles
do I accept your comments
or execpt your comments?
does my poetry submit
or does my pen hold the key to submission?
clever or obscure?
can you see beyond the metaphors?
do you want to...?
I can see the ghost through the window
even on the sunny days.
can you?
- COMMENTS
Bridget69about 19 years agoon interpretations and observations. There's nothing elusive about the imnpressions of this piece.
dcpoet44about 19 years agoand very clever it is.....i love this:
does my poetry submit
or does my pen hold the key to submission?
great work........don
Anonymousabout 19 years agowork and point taken. I like this:
"I can see the ghost through the window
even on the sunny days."
A whole poem could easily be written to that quote.
My Erotic Tailabout 19 years agospirit of the shadow that flows through the earth like a hand through water. Man can't walk thru a tree so he hugs it and shows its form, giggles from the carpet of leaves is only the wind, or think again! Okay I was inspired <grin>
My Erotic Tailabout 19 years agospirit of the shadow that flows through the earth like a hand through water. Man can't walk thru a tree so he hugs it and shows its form, giggles from the carpet of leaves is only the wind, or think again! Okay I was inspired <grin>
