- Erotic Poetry
- Emotional Dom
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Click heredraw your blade across my skin
never thought you'd be so cruel.
another dream lies forgotten
in this spreading pool.
torture me with your memories
flay me at your whim-
make me crawl for your forgiveness
punish me for imagined sins.
break down my will power
subjugate my mind.
leave me bound and hungry
for just a moment of your time.
kiss me with your poisoned sweetness
fingers deep in my lusty need.
kill me with your resistance
leave me broken at your feet.
~7/30/02~
- COMMENTS
jthserraalmost 20 years agoThough the double spacing is a little distracting, I found your phrasing very interesting and enjoyed the poems overall flow. The rhyme was subdued and unforced. I liked the way you emphasize the dominant versus submissive through the language rather than in font or capitalization choice. Very good.
jim : )
