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2rivers
2rivers
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private conversation on public sidewalk
obvious lovers holding hands
fold in delicate intent
I do not possess

they will remember the chill
in my gaze

2rivers
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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
maybe vicious...

but it seemed more poignant to me--as if the affront of a PDA is too painful to cause anything but a glare. still the poem triumphs because it conveys such complexity, such ambivalence--well to me--in so few words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
What a tiny.....

....vicious poem. So simple and so sharp.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
wow

so much more elegant than my usual "fuck you happy couple"

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