Exit Rome

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Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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lapsing now into
a 'when in rome' lingo
i drink all the zeitgeist
i possibly bear

adapting my voice
and my makebelieve stance
but not sounds in me
that only you can hear

abrupt adaptation
the fittest will conquer
this stale masturbation
of shallow charades

we put on our faces
and cling to eachother
with nothing between us
all 'when in rome' fades

in smiles of enchantment
and plastic ambition
we plough, hand in hand
through a Neverreal night

polite, rid of passion
and all indication
that 'when in rome' lies
on our faces ignite

so thank you, my anchor
reality benchmark
through rivers of zeitgest
you're keeping me sane

we head for a breather
all apologetic
faux smiles and adore
fleeing shit and champagne

now free of the river
the mask ocean vastness
you rid me of riddles
and undress my head

alone and together
comfortably ugly
our
  Neverreal
    'when in rome'
      monsters
        fall dead

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
great title and good poem

This poem is good enough that it bothered me, at first. It just seemed like a lovely day without its sun. In other words, I felt like it needed a bit more polishing. But after a second and third read, the cadence improved for me. So, it may be simply fine as is, and I didn't see it on the first read.

I guess I'll read it again to be sure. lol

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