Exotic Thought

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bluerains
bluerains
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Passing through the iris,
to see what is not seen,
calming the mind
in pungent moorings.
Two converge into focus and
witness a single thought
in echos of bedrock.
Morning doves coo
breaking stream
for a tiger pausing
by the rivers of blue.
A faint breeze
murmurs a gusty grin.

bluerains
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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Beautiful!

I loved word descriptions like pungent moorings. This well crafted verse left me marveling at it's simple beauty. Lovely Write!

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
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The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
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The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
your blue..

supplies the thought,

and perfect imaginary-

to master to the letter,

sensual..

a pale blue orb

in drifts,

and settles peacefully

to a *grin*.

luv2theblu-

sGp

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Love the imagery and, especially the line, "witness a single thought." Very nice.

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