Fabric of After Dark Obsession

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We all smiled
and chewed the
non committal banter,

trying not to stare.

We all thought
the same thing.

            how the hell
            does she keep that
            strapless pinnacle of flimsy
            from obeying natural law
            and slip?

Theories got tasted
with canapés and cocktails,
of safety pin pierced nipples,
of static charged implants,
of a low pressure vortex
in the valley between.

Maybe old time voodoo,
maybe new day arrowhead
vanity tech, indistinguishable
from magic...
...or maybe this, maybe that,
it's there, and still,
almost not.

            or maybe just duct tape,
            it holds everything else
            in the universe together

But not even Occam’s razor
could slash inflated libidos
into submission.

We all smiled
and ached to keep
our eyes eye level.

It never fell,

and we
never found out.


   

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
tortured to pleasure

I tend to agree with the knowlogable clues of both Champagne 1982 and Big Dada. I share your passionate painful memories, as I am sure any man would. That's our lot on this earth, won't have it any other way either.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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sweetjainsweetjainover 17 years ago
cling-a-licious

This is a very fun read, with or without duct tape. =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Clever

and witty

almost defies gravity in itself

good stuff

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
^

If you can't fix it with duct tape, it can't be fixed.

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