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Click hereI'm holding you,
but you're so far away.
Your distance in this embrace
shows me what I've truly lost,
and what I long to regain.
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darkerdreamerover 16 years agoRe: these lines
"Your distance in this embrace
shows me what I've truly lost," but it doesn't show >us<, show don't tell and all those other primary comp. lit. some-sucheries. Other than that, short and to the point, lacking in bells and assorted bullshit. I quite enjoy poetry without bells.
