- Erotic Poetry
- Fall into Me
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Electric pulses fuse us together
In a give and take relationship.
You kiss my tongue, nip my lip,
Breath against my electric skin.
Lightning bolts strike my core
Their echoes throw my head back.
Push.
Pull.
Grip.
Caress.
Curses overflow our kiss-swollen lips.
Driven by hunger, we dive again until
The fire inside both of us is quenched.
Sated.
Safe.
Warm.
Together.
We lay side by side until the pleasure
Ripples grow still.
- COMMENTS
todski28about 9 years agostandard :)
Very nice rhythm and effective use of line breaks, I feel I would cut a few words here and there, i.e.
Electric pulses fuse us together
In a give and take relationship.
You kiss my tongue, nip my lip,
Breath against my electric skin.
Lightning bolts strike my core
Their echoes throw my head back.
electric pulses fuse us
in give and take
kiss my tongue, nip my lip
breath against my electric skin (I love this line :)
lightning bolts strike
echoes that throw my head back
Please forgive the intrusion but I did enjoy the read.
