Familar Ache

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TeeTee
TeeTee
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My soul screams
anguish surges
every fiber trembles
that old familar ache
creeps in
he mocks me
sneers in victory
as he ensnares my fragile heart

Paralized
he tears at my hope
strips it away
rips it right out
Taunting
he dangles it
forces me to watch
as my heart he crushes
shattered little pieces

Cold
indifference washes over
as he beckons for my surrender
back into the arms of that
old familar ache...

TeeTee
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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

The familiar ache

Of love and heartbreak...

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Don't do it gurl~!

Enjoyed your new poem.

It has a ring of personal truth to it.

We all can feel the pain, heartache, and yes ... yearning.

Nice lil ride here gurl~

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
them aches...

can bring it all out.......that is for sure. this has a very nice flow and i can see the improvement from very early pieces. you are tightening them up nicely......keep it going.......nicely done here i might add.......don

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Good piece

Nicely written,

I enjoyed the read.

Thanks

~ Jenn

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