- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Farrago
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Click hereMy abundant words
arranged, rearranged
and arranged again
lack dimension, scope
as I hope to cope
with nothing.
I feel the lack of you
you, who knew
of mornings
and frightful nights
you, who held my hand
in the misty dark
when the sky cried
and sirens echoed in the hills
you, who were immortal
an essence beyond time
rhyme to my reason
a forever, ever happy.
And now silence
an unrelenting quiet
your voice is gone
as my words fail
to shape even a moment of you.
Please forgive my noise my silence.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years ago5, you are good with repeating sounds, but "you, who" begins to sound funny.
LeBrozabout 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.
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Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago"you, who were immortal...an essence beyond time...rhyme to my reason...a forever, ever happy" as I suppose you cannot escape the feelings that stirred you to write this piece. Although I have enjoyed all the variety of topics and formats with which you have pleasured our site, I do especially like this type, K. An absolutely beautifully expressed, heart poured out poem <smile>
Vixxx
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI like your internal rhyming and use of alliteration. An all together satisfying read.
Tess
