- Erotic Poetry
- fear
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premonition
as we both
came together
for the first time
would be
the last time
you came
inside
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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KOLKOREabout 17 years agoMan, your poems can weigh heavy on the soul just as they can be misleadingly easy to read – that is until the emotional meaning closes on you…
You move in a linear swift narrative from beginning straight to the end but at the same time you draw a much bigger circular line where the beginning and the end meet at the exact very point .Pointing to the relations between the narrative of the relations and that of the sexual encounter. Concentrated acutely economical use of words which is not bound by an external formula (Haiku or a Sonnet) but by an in-depth understanding of the proper way of the use of word and image in poetry: multilayered, and multifunctional –that’s the closest you can get to the subconscious mind, the way I understand it.
