fingerpaint

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DeniseNoe
DeniseNoe
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fingerpaint
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Denise Noe

U bleed on
     my fingers
I bleed on
     yr butt
2ladies 2gether
cycling in
     synch
we roll
   & we play
     & we make
        fingerpaint

DeniseNoe
DeniseNoe
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WickedEveWickedEveabout 15 years ago
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How about geting rid of the butt and trying: "U bleed on/my fingers/I bleed on U" Not a bad poem but the word butt seems out of place in this poem.