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Click hereI used a stripper
at the entry-way door
that peeled the finish
like clothes falling.
Following the grain
like feminine curves,
engrossed
in the hard wood.
Satisfied with the nude cherry
I entered the opening,
over the threshold
I splattered my stain.
Pressing it in deeper,
stroking it vibrantly,
till I was content
with the finish.
What can I say? Brilliant as always, as if I expected anything less than the best. Thanks for a great read and the huge smile :)
Dang!!
I love this image! however, ( yep, suggestion comin')
suppose you leave out "the opening" and the second "I" like this...
Satisfied with the nude cherry
I entered
over the threshold
and splattered my stain.
good work, MET. I am enjoying watching as you grow
hugs,
maria
these wee satires from your wabbit bag...you have gift of metaphoric humor...blue
I love the images you invoke here. The opening verse is classic. Truly erotic.
Tess
was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews of 8-11-06.
Loved this, Art!
Playful and powerful, you clever devil, you!
S&D