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Click hereAlmond-shaped flames hover above a candle wick.
Difficulty lies in believing you.
Fire and vanilla evoke memories… your smile and skin.
You’d never unleash the wrath willingly.
Strong and light; dangerous and safe; duplicity suits us.
Nice to have this understanding.
VanessaCarolyn
04-04-06
There is a really good poem somewhere here. Your imagery is really strong, think about extending it and weaving it into a stronger form to make it more effective. The last line is particularly weak, think about removing it.