Fire Lies

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Almond-shaped flames hover above a candle wick.

Difficulty lies in believing you.

Fire and vanilla evoke memories… your smile and skin.

You’d never unleash the wrath willingly.

Strong and light; dangerous and safe; duplicity suits us.

Nice to have this understanding.

VanessaCarolyn
04-04-06

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Could be developed further

There is a really good poem somewhere here. Your imagery is really strong, think about extending it and weaving it into a stronger form to make it more effective. The last line is particularly weak, think about removing it.

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