First Date at the Conservatory

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A galaxy hidden
on the inside of my elbow
reaches awareness of its existence
at the slide of your hand
over smooth hollow.
Molecular astronauts track
your eyes and wait for signals
of where life will be
discovered next.
A probe launches
from my shoulder to my ear.
I can almost hear the salutation bounce
from my drum, harbinger
of an exciting voyage.

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MsNatalie99MsNatalie99over 3 years ago

Beautifully written and a captivating use of words. Thank you

DeepGreenEyesDeepGreenEyesabout 14 years ago
I love this...

"A galaxy hidden

on the inside of my elbow"

– You had me there.

sassynycsassynycalmost 16 years ago
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"molecular astronauts..." you're light years ahead on this one. crafty as always

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 16 years ago
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Very clever. I loved "signals

of where life will be

discovered next."

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 16 years ago
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