First Fight

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logophile
logophile
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But tonight when I said
I miss you
You insisted that I only miss the ‘idea of you’
And it cut so deep.

It’s all just Words
you whispered into my ear from a thousand miles away
throwing my statement back at me.
Forcing me to look at myself in
a new and uncomfortable way.

With tears streaming down my face
I tried to justify my bad behavior.

Trembling hands reached for you.
Forgive me? Rang through my soul
echoing off the walls and into your heart.

How can it be more real than this?

I feel you around me.
Your warmth soothes the aches in my bones.
Your presence calms the longing in my heart.
When I go to sleep at night,
I hear you breathing next to me.

Your lips are soft and I yield to them.
Your hands are strong and I give myself to them.
Your need is fierce and I submit to it.

Laying before you,
Hoping it’s more than just Words…

logophile
logophile
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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I don't know about the relationship you are discussing, but I do know this poem is more than just words.

ty,bd

mlady_francemlady_francealmost 19 years ago
Wow

Each phraze is more powerful than the last. The pain in this poem is experessed to the fullest extend of the word.

~mlady

wishfulthinkingwishfulthinkingalmost 19 years ago
Love isn't smooth sailing

The sense of confusion, of love and need and fear, was shown perfectly by your words. Wonderful.

AppleBiterAppleBiteralmost 19 years ago
I felt this one

You hit the nail on the head with this one, Logo. Thank you for sharing. :)

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