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Click hereJack a lad of years a dozen
Sarah a lass of bakers same
Met at camp at summer camp
Love was quick and down the lane
Found a log a mossy log
And sat to play the eternal game
Jack took her hand so warm it was
And promised love or the infernal flame
Sarah blushed so pink, coyly blushed
And agreed her love always the same
Jack leaned forward lips pursed soft
And pecked her cheek with love too tame
Again Sarah blushed, sweetly blushed
Murmured you don’t kiss like Bobby Dane
And alone trudged Jack back to camp
Broken hearted, Sarah to blame
And Ah! You ask wanting to know
Yes for years this kiss... Jack’s bane!
Authors note: unfortunately true!
Memories. This poem brought them all back. Hope, love, sadness. Been there. Thank you. Jim.
to the early teen years. if only it had been the other way around....nicely done......don
cute / funny / sad, a poetic moment remembered? Nice write...a spiral descent of poetic layed tail, I meant tale or did I mean words? <cute poetic tale>
Some of the repetitions work better than others. Just for fun, you might want to rewrite this without the repetitions.