First Kiss

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JakeRivers
JakeRivers
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Jack a lad of years a dozen
Sarah a lass of bakers same

Met at camp at summer camp
Love was quick and down the lane

Found a log a mossy log
And sat to play the eternal game

Jack took her hand so warm it was
And promised love or the infernal flame

Sarah blushed so pink, coyly blushed
And agreed her love always the same

Jack leaned forward lips pursed soft
And pecked her cheek with love too tame

Again Sarah blushed, sweetly blushed
Murmured you don’t kiss like Bobby Dane

And alone trudged Jack back to camp
Broken hearted, Sarah to blame

And Ah! You ask wanting to know
Yes for years this kiss... Jack’s bane!

Authors note: unfortunately true!

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jiminabjiminababout 10 years ago
Wow

Memories. This poem brought them all back. Hope, love, sadness. Been there. Thank you. Jim.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Great reading!

There are strong perceptions here in this poem.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
a nice flashback....

to the early teen years. if only it had been the other way around....nicely done......don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
sour lips

cute / funny / sad, a poetic moment remembered? Nice write...a spiral descent of poetic layed tail, I meant tale or did I mean words? <cute poetic tale>

sacksackover 18 years ago
Very cute....

Some of the repetitions work better than others. Just for fun, you might want to rewrite this without the repetitions.

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