First Taste

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My Lilith plucked me
from amongst the others
Like Eve plucked the apple
from amongst the cherry blossoms

Juice ran down Eve’s chin
when she took that first bite
Now my juices run free
sweet as the first taste
of forbidden fruit

She that saved me from myself
granted me the right to love
and made me her altar
as she became my goddess.

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
eve ate no apple

more likely a fig. Eve eating apples and lilith and juice running down her chin needs a bit more turn of word to make an interesting poem.

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