- Erotic Poetry
- Flying Fire
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Fire water over feathered breasts.......higher
dancing to beating drums .............and
circling a blazing fire, rising higher
Chanting chorus .........................~rising~
ancient as the wind .............~ascends~
under the stars, the Fire's ~smoke~
The flames flickered ...................~flying~
then burst from the coals ......~a Phoenix~
flapping wings of fire, it ~arose~
- COMMENTS
LuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years agoloved it... not just the words and how they were laid out but the way you laid out the structure of the lines and stanza'a fit the beating of the tribal drum as well!
another great one Arty!
kisses,
T
Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years agoOne is a tribal dance around the fire and the other is the fire itself dancing. Great double meaning set to the music of poetry. It was both creative and clever, Art! <smile>
Vixxx
Bridget69almost 19 years agoVibrates with a kind of tribal energy that puts to great use nature's elements.
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoto steve nash of the suns basketball team in phoenix......*LOL*......being silly.....liked this......don
