Fog

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jessy19
jessy19
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Fog, lazy on the ground.
Blocking my view,
as it rises slowly;
in the early morning
like smoke
suffocating nature's beauty.

jessy19
jessy19
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amasterfoundamasterfoundabout 19 years ago
I like this...

Very neat! Good job!

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXabout 19 years ago
I liked it myself.

Could identify with it. Very descriptive.

sacksackabout 19 years ago
great but....

I just don't like the word "suffocating". How about "smothering"?

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