Forbidden Love

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harley23
harley23
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Naughty dreams of you
Grey eyes watching every move
Drop dead gorgeous

i think it is great
the things that run through your mind
why can't i be there

i see you at night
peering thru the window pane
drink in the delight

Unable to breathe
Your hand tight around my throat
Asphyxiation

Gasping for my breath
my heart skips a beat or two
she slays me daily

Little death escapes
My body all a quiver
Your breath revives me

harley23
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Cajun BabyCajun Babyover 19 years ago
love it

your poetry is great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not breathing

this reminds me of some wonderful times spent not breathing.

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
Great stanza...

"Unable to breathe

Your hand tight around my throat

Asphyxiation"

Great way to say "Take my breath away" Gives the idea a more powerful and almost sinister implication. Nice poem, good sense of voyuerism.

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
I'm no good at commenting on poetry

But you had such clear images, left me breathless.

Great job. ;-)