- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Forever
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If I had only known.
Forever had it’s limits.
Forever is not infinity.
Only a concept of man’s mental abyss!
Forever mere seconds,
Forever was now,
no future
no tomorrow
Just now....
If I had only known.
My lips would have stayed on yours a second longer.
Let the warmth of our hands joined linger for one more breath.
I would have felt one more beat of your heart.
Swam a second longer in your eyes.
Inhaled your soul a little deeper.
Cherished all these things for a split moment more.
If I had only known...
Forever was only now...then...
dlt © March 16 2004
- COMMENTS
sackover 19 years ago"Let the warmth of our joined hands...." is a line that will resonate long in the memory. Bravo!
My Erotic Tailover 19 years agosome really good lines...swimming in her eyes...awesome!
snow balls into a powerful poem!
WickedEveover 19 years agoYour poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the poetry board.
*No thermometer rating
Christina O. Leighover 19 years ago::Sniffles::
Forever? What's that?
Oh, how I know this feeling....if ONLY...
I should harden my heart!
Good work!
Anonymousover 19 years agoThe last line is particularly strong. Please do note that the possessive "its" requires no apostrophe (damn the schoolmarm in me--apologies!).
